Is this a perfect letter to be sent out?
Hello, is this below letter is perfectly written? Is there any grammar mistakes need to be done? If there is, is there any good samaritan can re write it or prefect it for me. I owe you a million thanks! TQ Here is the letter: The Air/Freight/Courier Dispatch Manager, Dear Sirs: I obtained your contact details from > http://www. Kindly, review of your accounting records, and if you have noticed that you have spent a rather large amount of money simply for courier or air freight fees recently, mainly by your clients/customers ordering items in small quantities repeatedly. We merely are suggesting the cost of forwarding through courier or air freight often-ordered parts, spares or products by your clients who are in Malaysia, Thailand, etc to multiple addresses overseas, can be quite high. We have a proposal that can help you to save a lot of revenue on courier or airfreight charges you are spending. We are very much interested to purchase in bulk the spares, parts or products often ordered by , mainly by your clients/customers in small quantity repeatedly and resell it to your clients. This type of customer service can help us to make significant savings for your company. It is very economical, simple, and efficient to service your existing or new customers from a base in Malaysia. We also have the capacity to purchase your product stocks in volume, and we can forward using cheaper courier rates to your potential customers in neighbouring countries, which include: Thailand; Singapore; Indonesia; Philippines, should you receive inquiries from those regions. Try us out, and we have no doubt that you will be pleased with the results! We appreciate your business and wish our inter-company relationship to continue and be beneficial to both of our companies. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,
Media & Journalism - 2 Answers
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1 :
yup,it's about right. in the end maybe change to: Kind Regards? Looks better that way.
2 :
Kindly, review is a bit demanding. You don't need the comma or the word for and because you have asked a question by using if, that sentence really needs an answer. Perhaps- "You might have noticed from your accounting records that the cost of courier or air freight fees has increased recently, particularly if your clients reorder small quantities." And conventionally, if you address Dear Sir, you end Yours faithfully and if you address by name or title, you end Yours sincerely. Hope this helps.
Saturday, September 28, 2013
Saturday, September 14, 2013
What do you think about this song we let our little brothers listen to?
What do you think about this song we let our little brothers listen to?
I'm sixteen and my little sister is 12 and we were listening to his song. We have two little brother 6 and 4 and we let them listen to the song, matter of fact my 4 year old brother was listening to this song and singing the lyrics to it, it was funny that my baby brother did that lol. and my 6 year old brother listen to it a lot now, well anyways these are the lyrics just to give you the jits of the song: Hail Mary full of grace.. smack the bitches in the face; take her Gucci bag and the North Face off her back, jab her if she act funny with the money oh you got me mistaken honey I don't wanna rape ya, I just want the paper The Visa, kapeesha? I'm out like, The Vapors Who's the one you call Mr. Macho, the head honcho Swift fist like Camacho, I got so much style I should be down wit the Stylistics Make up to break up [singing in background] people need to wake up Smell the indonesia; beat you to a seizure Then fu your moms, hit the skins til amnesia She don't remember! Just the two hits! Her hittin the floor, and me hittin the clits! Suckin on the dic! Had the hooker beggin for the dic And your moms ain't ugly love; my dick got rock quick I guess I was a combination of House of Pain and Bobby Brown I was Humpin Around and Jump-in Around. oh yea that aint the whole song but i just gave u like the first verse to get the jits of the song. now imagine my baby brother saying this, funny right?
Adolescent - 11 Answers
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1 :
Where is your mother.
2 :
wow.. -.-
3 :
No, that's not funny. I actually find it rather inappropriate. Get a life.
4 :
What the fuck Your parents FAIL at raising all of you.
5 :
funny and inappropriate?
6 :
Not Funny At All. You are going to get them in Trouble.
7 :
NO this is terribly irresponsible as your brothers get older they will continue using language like this, repeat it at school and get in to a lot of trouble. As an older sister you should be a role model. children shouldn't really ever use bad language, but if your going to speak like that in front of them, or show them music like that, wait until they're a reasonable age, such as 10 or so.
8 :
I will just say this. Since you and your sister think it's so funny to let your brother listen to music like this. how funny will it be when they are teenagers and you and your sister are grown women and they have no respect for women because of the music you "let" them listen to. Just think about that, this kind of music is horrible for little kids their age to listen to, it's even horrible for you girls to be listening to it too.
9 :
Not funny AT ALL. Never let my child listen to that.
10 :
that wasn't funny,if you are a troll at least be a little entertaining.
11 :
Why would your mother allow any of you to listen to such garbage? I wouldn't. At least listen to it when your brothers are not around. I think the things we see, the music we hear, the movies we watch, all influence what we think and form who we are - why would you want filth like that going into your mind? With your brain, it's a case of "Garbage in, Garbage out" - you get out what you put in. If you value your mind, morals and values, then be a little more discriminating about what you listen to, decide to only fill your head with things that will improve you, not make you less than you are. Be the best you can be - turn off what does not improve you, turn off what contaminates you.
I'm sixteen and my little sister is 12 and we were listening to his song. We have two little brother 6 and 4 and we let them listen to the song, matter of fact my 4 year old brother was listening to this song and singing the lyrics to it, it was funny that my baby brother did that lol. and my 6 year old brother listen to it a lot now, well anyways these are the lyrics just to give you the jits of the song: Hail Mary full of grace.. smack the bitches in the face; take her Gucci bag and the North Face off her back, jab her if she act funny with the money oh you got me mistaken honey I don't wanna rape ya, I just want the paper The Visa, kapeesha? I'm out like, The Vapors Who's the one you call Mr. Macho, the head honcho Swift fist like Camacho, I got so much style I should be down wit the Stylistics Make up to break up [singing in background] people need to wake up Smell the indonesia; beat you to a seizure Then fu your moms, hit the skins til amnesia She don't remember! Just the two hits! Her hittin the floor, and me hittin the clits! Suckin on the dic! Had the hooker beggin for the dic And your moms ain't ugly love; my dick got rock quick I guess I was a combination of House of Pain and Bobby Brown I was Humpin Around and Jump-in Around. oh yea that aint the whole song but i just gave u like the first verse to get the jits of the song. now imagine my baby brother saying this, funny right?
Adolescent - 11 Answers
Random Answers, Critics, Comments, Opinions :
1 :
Where is your mother.
2 :
wow.. -.-
3 :
No, that's not funny. I actually find it rather inappropriate. Get a life.
4 :
What the fuck Your parents FAIL at raising all of you.
5 :
funny and inappropriate?
6 :
Not Funny At All. You are going to get them in Trouble.
7 :
NO this is terribly irresponsible as your brothers get older they will continue using language like this, repeat it at school and get in to a lot of trouble. As an older sister you should be a role model. children shouldn't really ever use bad language, but if your going to speak like that in front of them, or show them music like that, wait until they're a reasonable age, such as 10 or so.
8 :
I will just say this. Since you and your sister think it's so funny to let your brother listen to music like this. how funny will it be when they are teenagers and you and your sister are grown women and they have no respect for women because of the music you "let" them listen to. Just think about that, this kind of music is horrible for little kids their age to listen to, it's even horrible for you girls to be listening to it too.
9 :
Not funny AT ALL. Never let my child listen to that.
10 :
that wasn't funny,if you are a troll at least be a little entertaining.
11 :
Why would your mother allow any of you to listen to such garbage? I wouldn't. At least listen to it when your brothers are not around. I think the things we see, the music we hear, the movies we watch, all influence what we think and form who we are - why would you want filth like that going into your mind? With your brain, it's a case of "Garbage in, Garbage out" - you get out what you put in. If you value your mind, morals and values, then be a little more discriminating about what you listen to, decide to only fill your head with things that will improve you, not make you less than you are. Be the best you can be - turn off what does not improve you, turn off what contaminates you.
Saturday, September 7, 2013
what do you think about this song we let our little brothers listen to?
what do you think about this song we let our little brothers listen to?
I'm sixteen and my little sister is 12 and we were listening to his song. We have two little brother 6 and 4 and we let them listen to the song, matter of fact my 4 year old brother was listening to this song and singing the lyrics to it, it was funny that my baby brother did that lol. and my 6 year old brother listen to it a lot now, well anyways these are the lyrics just to give you the jits of the song: Hail Mary full of grace.. smack the bitches in the face; take her Gucci bag and the North Face off her back, jab her if she act funny with the money oh you got me mistaken honey I don't wanna rape ya, I just want the paper The Visa, kapeesha? I'm out like, The Vapors Who's the one you call Mr. Macho, the head honcho Swift fist like Camacho, I got so much style I should be down wit the Stylistics Make up to break up [singing in background] people need to wake up Smell the indonesia; beat you to a seizure Then fu your moms, hit the skins til amnesia She don't remember! Just the two hits! Her hittin the floor, and me hittin the clits! Suckin on the dic! Had the hooker beggin for the dic And your moms ain't ugly love; my dick got rock quick I guess I was a combination of House of Pain and Bobby Brown I was Humpin Around and Jump-in Around. oh yea that aint the whole song but i just gave u like the first verse to get the jits of the song. now imagine my baby brother saying this, funny right?
Family - 3 Answers
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1 :
he should not be saying this stop him
2 :
it's not funny. your brother had no idea what the lyrics were about so what makes it so funny? and i can't believe you and your sister are ok with that style of music. that is incredibly sexist and i think it's appalling that men can sing about that and women will listen to it and not realise just how horrible it is. I'm not a feminist but i hate it when guys sing about females like that, like they're nothing more then sexual tools to do their bidding. no wonder girls are losing their virginity so young. guys listen to this music and think it's the norm and girls hear it and feel pressured.
3 :
this is sick and shows your total lack of respect for any thing
I'm sixteen and my little sister is 12 and we were listening to his song. We have two little brother 6 and 4 and we let them listen to the song, matter of fact my 4 year old brother was listening to this song and singing the lyrics to it, it was funny that my baby brother did that lol. and my 6 year old brother listen to it a lot now, well anyways these are the lyrics just to give you the jits of the song: Hail Mary full of grace.. smack the bitches in the face; take her Gucci bag and the North Face off her back, jab her if she act funny with the money oh you got me mistaken honey I don't wanna rape ya, I just want the paper The Visa, kapeesha? I'm out like, The Vapors Who's the one you call Mr. Macho, the head honcho Swift fist like Camacho, I got so much style I should be down wit the Stylistics Make up to break up [singing in background] people need to wake up Smell the indonesia; beat you to a seizure Then fu your moms, hit the skins til amnesia She don't remember! Just the two hits! Her hittin the floor, and me hittin the clits! Suckin on the dic! Had the hooker beggin for the dic And your moms ain't ugly love; my dick got rock quick I guess I was a combination of House of Pain and Bobby Brown I was Humpin Around and Jump-in Around. oh yea that aint the whole song but i just gave u like the first verse to get the jits of the song. now imagine my baby brother saying this, funny right?
Family - 3 Answers
Random Answers, Critics, Comments, Opinions :
1 :
he should not be saying this stop him
2 :
it's not funny. your brother had no idea what the lyrics were about so what makes it so funny? and i can't believe you and your sister are ok with that style of music. that is incredibly sexist and i think it's appalling that men can sing about that and women will listen to it and not realise just how horrible it is. I'm not a feminist but i hate it when guys sing about females like that, like they're nothing more then sexual tools to do their bidding. no wonder girls are losing their virginity so young. guys listen to this music and think it's the norm and girls hear it and feel pressured.
3 :
this is sick and shows your total lack of respect for any thing
Sunday, September 1, 2013
Why does no one in Pittsburgh care that the World Bank is descending on their town?
Why does no one in Pittsburgh care that the World Bank is descending on their town?
The G20 (Group of 20) Summit, which includes the G-20 + Spain, the Netherlands, NEPAD, ASEAN (Association of Southeast Asian Nations), the EU, the UN, the World Bank, the IMF (International Monetary Fund), the WTO (World Trade Organization) and the FSF (Financial Stability Forum) is coming to Pittsburgh September 24, and no one seems to care. This is a HUGE event, and the organizations coming to Pittsburgh are some of the most controversial and unjust in the world. They represent globalization, a corporate movement that rises above all law. Child labor laws? Slave labor laws? The WTO has no such thing. In fact, by World Trade Organization Law, the United States is not permitted to ban imports on products made by slave labor. If we did such a thing, we would be expelled from the organization. Ever take a look at the tags on your clothes? More often than not, they'll say "Made in Bangladesh, Vietnam, Honduras, Sri Lanka, Indonesia, perhaps India, etc". This almost guarantees that they were made in a sweatshop. That's what American companies do: build factories overseas and employ the local population at wages that are unthinkable in developed countries (sometimes $1 a day or less). The World Bank, for example, requires any indebted developing country wishing to borrow from the IMF (International Monetary Fund) to have a privatized water system. That means citizens have to buy their water from usually corrupt corporations, who don't have to abide by government standards, all because the World Bank assumes indebted governments can't provide water to their citizens. So instead, they make it a commodity that can be bought and sold. If you don't have money, you can't have water. Simple as that. What's truly alarming, however, is that no one in the United States seems to care. When the G20 came to London in April, the protests were so intense that one man died. In Pittsburgh, though, the usually question seems to be not "are you angry?" but rather "will i be safe?" "Are the protests going to be too violent?" "Am I threatened by angry protesters?" Or am I just totally uninformed about plans for protests/marches/etc? Perhaps the people of Pittsburgh and the United States really do care??
International Organizations - 3 Answers
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1 :
You have correctly identified the international corruption for which the IMF, WTO, U.N. and others exist. Excellent point. These people, as well as leftists in our country, seek to establish a one world government as a ruling class all over the planet. They can be stopped, but only if they are totally exposed and opposed by resolute individual nations. Obama supports loaning more than 100 billion to the IMF on very favorable credit terms. Considering we are in debt, that is criminal. it is also likely it will not be paid back, as the IMF has a history of not getting paid back itself.
2 :
it is Pittsburgh Steeler football time of the year,.. when the stuff hits the fan the people will wake up,.. first answerer put it well,.. i e a e,.. avatar of the unification,..
3 :
Perhaps most do not agree with the positions you outlined in your "question," and that's why they're going to rampage and destroy their own town (no, outsiders like you will come to do that). Why is it only rich kids wearing those shirts, jeans, and shoes made in poor countries who are protesting and breaking things, and not the poor people who have the jobs? Because globalization has done more to raise living standards in the 3rd world than any government aid program in history. Look at India and China for examples of the creations of new middle classes that never before existed. So I don't buy your argument that globalization hurts poor countries. They can't have the government run their water systems?? You put a lot of faith in corrupt, power-hungry, bumbling 3rd-world bureaucrats! Sadly, these G-20 "protests" have become violence-fests for bored, wealthy youth seizing many of the crackpot theories you put forward above. Seattle and Genoa will go down in infamy as where the opposition (which has some valid points, if only it had a knowledgeable, mature voice to put them forward on the world stage) forever lost credibility. The G-20 meetings have seen hooligans destroying the hardwork of honest citizens (smashing shops, graffiti, injuring/killing police, etc), and that's the image around the world. I like you word choice re London: "intense" protests resulted in a man's death. I wonder how many of the people protesting so "intensely" went back to cushy flats, drank some imported beer, put their iPod on the stereo (all made in Asia), took off their $50 Hilfiger top made in Bangladesh (the one with the brand name prominently displayed), and made an evening of it with nary a thought to perhaps going to these countries they profess to care so much about and actually help needy people? So, in brief, my answer to you is: because the lack of knowledge, stunning hypocrisy, and violence displayed by so many at these events in years past.
The G20 (Group of 20) Summit, which includes the G-20 + Spain, the Netherlands, NEPAD, ASEAN (Association of Southeast Asian Nations), the EU, the UN, the World Bank, the IMF (International Monetary Fund), the WTO (World Trade Organization) and the FSF (Financial Stability Forum) is coming to Pittsburgh September 24, and no one seems to care. This is a HUGE event, and the organizations coming to Pittsburgh are some of the most controversial and unjust in the world. They represent globalization, a corporate movement that rises above all law. Child labor laws? Slave labor laws? The WTO has no such thing. In fact, by World Trade Organization Law, the United States is not permitted to ban imports on products made by slave labor. If we did such a thing, we would be expelled from the organization. Ever take a look at the tags on your clothes? More often than not, they'll say "Made in Bangladesh, Vietnam, Honduras, Sri Lanka, Indonesia, perhaps India, etc". This almost guarantees that they were made in a sweatshop. That's what American companies do: build factories overseas and employ the local population at wages that are unthinkable in developed countries (sometimes $1 a day or less). The World Bank, for example, requires any indebted developing country wishing to borrow from the IMF (International Monetary Fund) to have a privatized water system. That means citizens have to buy their water from usually corrupt corporations, who don't have to abide by government standards, all because the World Bank assumes indebted governments can't provide water to their citizens. So instead, they make it a commodity that can be bought and sold. If you don't have money, you can't have water. Simple as that. What's truly alarming, however, is that no one in the United States seems to care. When the G20 came to London in April, the protests were so intense that one man died. In Pittsburgh, though, the usually question seems to be not "are you angry?" but rather "will i be safe?" "Are the protests going to be too violent?" "Am I threatened by angry protesters?" Or am I just totally uninformed about plans for protests/marches/etc? Perhaps the people of Pittsburgh and the United States really do care??
International Organizations - 3 Answers
Random Answers, Critics, Comments, Opinions :
1 :
You have correctly identified the international corruption for which the IMF, WTO, U.N. and others exist. Excellent point. These people, as well as leftists in our country, seek to establish a one world government as a ruling class all over the planet. They can be stopped, but only if they are totally exposed and opposed by resolute individual nations. Obama supports loaning more than 100 billion to the IMF on very favorable credit terms. Considering we are in debt, that is criminal. it is also likely it will not be paid back, as the IMF has a history of not getting paid back itself.
2 :
it is Pittsburgh Steeler football time of the year,.. when the stuff hits the fan the people will wake up,.. first answerer put it well,.. i e a e,.. avatar of the unification,..
3 :
Perhaps most do not agree with the positions you outlined in your "question," and that's why they're going to rampage and destroy their own town (no, outsiders like you will come to do that). Why is it only rich kids wearing those shirts, jeans, and shoes made in poor countries who are protesting and breaking things, and not the poor people who have the jobs? Because globalization has done more to raise living standards in the 3rd world than any government aid program in history. Look at India and China for examples of the creations of new middle classes that never before existed. So I don't buy your argument that globalization hurts poor countries. They can't have the government run their water systems?? You put a lot of faith in corrupt, power-hungry, bumbling 3rd-world bureaucrats! Sadly, these G-20 "protests" have become violence-fests for bored, wealthy youth seizing many of the crackpot theories you put forward above. Seattle and Genoa will go down in infamy as where the opposition (which has some valid points, if only it had a knowledgeable, mature voice to put them forward on the world stage) forever lost credibility. The G-20 meetings have seen hooligans destroying the hardwork of honest citizens (smashing shops, graffiti, injuring/killing police, etc), and that's the image around the world. I like you word choice re London: "intense" protests resulted in a man's death. I wonder how many of the people protesting so "intensely" went back to cushy flats, drank some imported beer, put their iPod on the stereo (all made in Asia), took off their $50 Hilfiger top made in Bangladesh (the one with the brand name prominently displayed), and made an evening of it with nary a thought to perhaps going to these countries they profess to care so much about and actually help needy people? So, in brief, my answer to you is: because the lack of knowledge, stunning hypocrisy, and violence displayed by so many at these events in years past.
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