Can you fix the wrong sentences?
I'm going to have an English exam (making a description) on next Monday. I tried to make one but it's terrible. I really mess up with the grammars and vocabs and stuff like that. If you have enough tim e, you can fix the wrong sentences and give me tips how to make a simple and good description. I'm on 9 grade and live in Indonesia (Southeast Asia), by the way. So don't be surprised with my bad English. "My Bedroom" The most messy room in my house is must be my bedroom. It's just medium, too large nor too small. It only has one large window on the north side with my bed beside it. There's a lot of stuff on my bed, besides the pillow, blanket and all, such like pencils, money, notes, clothes, comb, and my cell phone. Under the bed there are dozens of dusty books, my broken tennis racket, my soccer ball, wood and iron pipes, which I still have no idea where they come from, and stuff that I don't know what it calls. And you can say that there's no floor there. I mean it already covers by trash of my snacks, my school books, magazines, clothes, plastic bags from supermarkets, dozens of papers, my sneakers and I don't know what else. And on the west side there's my wardrobe. It's sort of messy too. Shorts, t-shirts, shirts, underwear, jeans, jackets, scarves, sweater and all are in there organizedly (can somebody find a better word this??). There's a quite big radio on it. And the walls are full with clothes that are hanging, I'll admit that I have too many clothes, and posters of my favorite artists and movies. They're Kelly Clarkson, Queen, Avril Lavigne, Black Eyed Peas, U2, Bjork, Star Wars, Goal!, The Duchess, Shrek and many more. I'd been trying/tried (which one i should use?? my teacher said theres a big difference between "been trying" and "been tried"; can somebody tell me wtf is the difference??!) to clean up my bedroom/clean my bed room up (which one is correct?) for several times for sure. But it doesn't really work. It always back as messy as usual in the next day after I cleaned it up. So I guess it is a destiny for y bedroom to be always messy.
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Put this through WORD first ten go from there. Alphabetize your lists.
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"My Bedroom" The most messy room in my house must be my bedroom. It's just medium, not very large nor very small. It only has one large window on the north side with my bed beside it. There's a lot of stuff on my bed, besides the pillow, blanket and all, such like my pencils, money, notes, clothes, comb, and my cell phone. Under the bed there are dozens of dusty books, my broken tennis racket, my soccer ball, wood and iron pipes, which I still have no idea where they come from, and stuff that I don't know what it is. And you can say that there's no floor there. I mean it is already covered by trash from my snacks, my school books, magazines, clothes, plastic bags from supermarkets, dozens of papers, my sneakers, ect. And on the west side there's my wardrobe. It's sort of messy too. Shorts, t-shirts, shirts, underwear, jeans, jackets, scarves, sweaters, and lots more! There's my favorite radio on it. The walls are full with clothes that are hanging, I'll admit that I have too many clothes, and posters of my favorite artists and movies. They're Kelly Clarkson, Queen, Avril Lavigne, Black Eyed Peas, U2, Bjork, Star Wars, Goal!, The Duchess, Shrek and many more posters that are up. I have been trying ( been trying means you are still TRYING, versus TRIED means you basically gave up already ) to clean-up my bedroom. But it doesn't really work. It always is back as messy as usual in the next day after I cleaned it up. So I guess it is a destiny for my bedroom to be always messy. ~I proof-read your article. Made some changes, not bad. :D
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'I have been trying' suggests an ongoing action - something that you are still trying to do. For example, if you have been trying to find something for several days, but still haven't found it yet, then you have been trying to find it. 'I have tried' suggests an action that has been stopped - in other words, something that you have given up trying to do. If you tried to find something several days ago, but then you stopped looking for it, you could say 'I have tried' or 'I tried' to find it. You can say 'It has been tried,' but I would only use it occasionally, and in a sentence such as this. 'Climbing Mount Everest has been tried before, but no-one has ever succeeded.' If you use 'has been tried,' it means that you weren't doing it.
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The most messy room in my house must be my bedroom. It's medium sized, not too large nor too small. It only has one large window on the north side with my bed beside it. There is a lot of stuff on my bed, besides the pillow and blanket, things like pencils, money, notes, clothes, a comb, and my cell phone. Under the bed there are dozens of dusty books, my broken tennis racket, my soccer ball, wood and iron pipes, which I still have no idea where they come from. You can say that there's no floor in my room, I mean its covered in trash from my snacks, my school books, magazines, clothes, plastic bags from the supermarket, dozens of papers, my sneakers and lots of other things. On the west side there's my wardrobe. It's sort of messy too. Shorts, t-shirts, shirts, underwear, jeans, jackets, scarves, and sweaters which for the most part are organized. There is quite a big radio on top of my dresser. The walls are full of hanging clothes and I'll be the first to admit that I have too many clothes. Also on my walls are posters of my favorite artists and movies. They are Kelly Clarkson, Queen, Avril Lavigne, Black Eyed Peas, U2, Bjork, Star Wars, Goal!, The Duchess, Shrek and many more. I've tried ( "tried"is past tense it means you have already done it "trying" is present tence which means its happening now) to clean my bedroom up (either one is fine) and keep it clean but it never seems to work. It is usually messy the very next day after I've cleaned it. So I guess it is a destiny for my bedroom to be always messy.
