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You Can or Can’t Judge a Book By It’s Cover What do people do when they know their friend real personality? They will make a big decision whether keep or not relation. This happens to almost everyone, because of they judge a book by it’s cover. Some people will not judge a person or thing by appearance. Everything change over time how people look and think about others. Yes, you can judge a book by it’s cover. I believe everyone judge a person by their look such as wear, say and act. In Indonesia, when people wear a top brand clothes Calvin Klein shirt, Hugo Boss jeans and bunch of jewelry; they think about rich or high class person because of people who has money can buy a high quality and top products. On the other hand, if someone see that people wear a ugly clothes and flip flop, they will think about poor and middle or low class. Furthermore, people can judge by their attitude. When someone meet a serious person, they may think that person is mad although that person may not mad. Most people judge someone else by their look when they are first meet. We can say that almost happen in everyone, and it is test your instinct. For instance, a taxi driver told me that you think I will take you somewhere else, because of he did not know the way to my home then I decided to gave him directions. I was aware that he wanted to do bad thing to me because of I saw his face so serious, and he had been drunk. No, you can’t judge a book by its cover. People always look outside the box when they want to point something that someone else has it. People who distinguish between either nationality and ethnicity could have the wrong perspective. People always think I am Korean, Japanese or Chinese, but I am not. Then, I tell them I am Indonesian and they are surprised. You may need to take a closer look at something or someone. You shouldn’t always look outside his or her cover, instead you should look at what is inside his or her cover. People always think that a disability is a person’s weakness, but don't you think that they maybe have a wonderful skill which normal people can't do or don’t have. Nevertheless, people think that rappers are bad and cruel people who act how they want to and don't care about what others think. I think that they like to express themselves and be creative with style and music. For instance, LiL Wayne lived in a poor neighborhood; he grew up as a rapper musician. He wrote and sang his own lyrics by himself and he became one of the most well-known rappers in the world who earns millions of dollars from his songs. Yes and no, you can and can not judge people by it’s cover. Glamour, fabulous and attractive are the way people will get excited to be apart of business otherwise the inside is poor, but people look at outside are perfect. For example, a new restaurant which it is expensive and glamour by look. People who eat there are rich, but after a couple week since open, people do not like to eat there because of poor service and bad taste of foods. People always judge others by it’s cover before they do something. People who has tattoos they think about as bad person. My opinion, people who has tattoos want to be artistic or perform themselves as an unique idea which they put on his body that has meaning for them. On the other hand, people say you can not judge a book by it’s cover, but people still do it. If people know what the real life happen when they make a judgment to someone else, they will not judge others by it’s cover anymore. In conclusion, you should not judge a person by it’s cover. Before you do that you may look at yourself, and they probably judge you from your hidden secret. You make a huge decision if you judge other from outside look, but when you know what the inside is, you will disappointed. Obviously, people make a judgment by look at outside his or her appearance because of they have a lack of trust each others. I would not want them to judge me, and I never judge them. The value of something is not always obvious from what we see on surface, so we should not judgments until we know the exact what it is from inside. email qral_hdr@yahoo.com thank a lot.
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"This happens to almost everyone, because of they judge a book by it’s cover." You should say "This happens to almost everyone, because of them judging a book by it's cover" because that sounds better,read yours and then read mines to see what sounds better....!I'm only 15yrs. old....LOL!
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I didn't read the whole thing but something in the last paragraph caught my eye. You can't say "...you should not judge a person by it’s cover" because a person is not an it. You have to say something like, you should not judge a person by their cover. Hmm I was just browsing the rest of the essay and I saw that you made that same mistake a few more times. I also noticed a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. From reading that, I gather that English is not your first language. I hope your teacher will be understanding of that. I suggest that you proof read it again..good luck! One more thing, the title doesn't make sense. It should be something like: Can you or Can't you judge a book by it's cover?
